Sunnyville Stories Episode 4 pencils, pages 1-2

I’m hard at working inking the fourth episode of Sunnyville Stories at the time of this blog post.  Between that, keeping this blog updated with good content, and working on my professional career, this is quite a challenge for me.  I do have a rough work print of the fourth episode and I’ll share with you some of those pages.  The fourth installment of Sunnyville is titled “Don’t Answer Me”.  In contrast to the earlier episodes, this is quite a dramatic episode.

Episode 4 page 1 pencilsI’ve had this image in my head for awhile.  I pictured Samantha Macgregor and her older sister, Margaret, just walking along the streets of town.  It took a long time to realize that image and put it down on paper.  As you can see in this rough pencil, I’m making use of linear perspective, namely one-point.  Around the time I started pencilling this comic, I started taking a class in perspective drawing with noted DC/Marvel professional Sal Amendola.  While I’m not positive how much use I’ll make of two-point or three-point, it’s still good to know and it has helped my drafting skills here.  Anyway, we see the girls here just walking along and talking about their toaster oven.  Continue reading

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How to Make Comics: Pencilling Comics

I’m certain you’ve all got your scripts written and you’ve sketched out thumbnails.  Now comes the part where you actually draw your comics.  This stage is called “pencilling” and it’s self-explanatory.  Essentially, you draw your comics in pencil on your paper.  STOP!  Don’t start just yet.  You’ll need some basic materials for the pencilling stage.  Here’s a short video of mine giving a basic rundown.

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For those of you who can’t watch (or don’t want to watch), I’ll discuss the items more in detail. Continue reading

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More Neat Comics to Check Out!

This is a very special blog entry.  I’m not here to talk about myself today or my work.  In fact, I’d like to tell you about the works of some other talented people out there.  I’ve been networking in order to get my name out there and meet others in the field (check out my post on that topic if you haven’t already) – finding some very incredible talent out there.

One of the more prominent ones I’ve been checking out is Jason Brubaker.  By day, he works for Dreamworks Animation (yes, THAT Dreamworks – makers of Shrek and Flushed Away).  But when not there, he’s been working on an epic piece called reMIND.

Brubaker has a number of pages up on his blog and to describe it here would take up many blog posts – you’re better off viewing his comics and reading insights into his story and working process there.  You WON’T be disappointed and this work looks promising. Continue reading

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Sunnyville Episode 3 preview

Today, I thought I’d share a few teasers from the third episode of Sunnyville Stories, titled “the Train Robbers”.  This took quite some time to finish.  I started on it sometime in mid-September of 2010 and it was not sent to the printer until late January of this year.  I hope a lot of you learn something from all this – making comics is hard work.  It takes a lot out of you and much energy goes into it.  But I digress.

The third episode of Sunnyville is an action and adventure story involving two local bandits, the Weasel brothers.  These two are a pair of weasels who live by taking whatever they can to survive – regardless of whether or not it belongs to someone else.  This will lead them a number of times into conflict with the people of Sunnyville and this story will be no exception.  Anyway, the story involves the Loutron family (check out their post if you forgot who they are) as well as our two heroes, Sam and Rusty.  The two of them drop off items at the town laundromat that need to be cleaned.  Mrs. Loutron tells them that only a special detergent can clean their items…from there, things take a turn for the worse.

Episode 3 page 14

 

Rusty and Sam are wandering about town when they both notice something strange is going on.  I’m really proud of my art technique here.  I’m really starting to get control of my tools.  Notice that bush in the foreground of the top panel – the outline is done with a brush and those quick scribble lines were done with a Hunt 101 nib.  I find that nib does well for scribbling and makes for more varied lines that the Uniball brand pens I use in some of my other work. Continue reading

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How to Make Comics: Thumbnails and Layouts

Welcome back, everyone, to my tutorial on making comics.  I’ve discussed how to generate ideas for comics, talked about the basics and more advanced principles of writing,  and even talked about how to develop drawing skills for comics.  Today I’m going to start discussing pencilling comics and there’s some very important that you have to do before you start putting things on the comics page.  You have to make thumbnails.  What are those exactly?

Thumbnails are crude sketches of what your comics pages will look like.  It’s important to work these out AHEAD of time before you put anything onto your comics page.  Why?  You have to make sure that your dialog works and that your action is clear.  You also have to see if you have too many panels or two few or if you have too much going on at once.  Do you really want to end up putting finished pencils onto your bristol board only to find that what you’ve drawn doesn’t work?  It’s better to make that mistake in your thumbnails.  Trust me, you’ll save a lot of time and grief that way.

There are many ways to do your thumbnails.  Some will draw them and then enlarge the drawings to the size they draw the final comic.  Some will do really messy thumbnails.  Some will just do dialog alone and then try to fill in images as they go along.  How do I do my thumbnails?

Thumbnail sample 1Very minimal, that’s how!  I take ordinary lined notebook paper and draw in pencil on that.  Following my final typed script, I’ll draw Rusty, Sam, and company as crude stick figures and use notes as I go along to indicate how a character should be reacting or where they are looking.

I know – to some of you out there, my method of working looks very crude.  It’s important to remember that these rough sketch are just that – rough sketches.  Don’t fall in love with your thumbnails because they are not final.  If you find something doesn’t work, throw it out and start over.

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Sunnyville Stories Episode 2, pages 4-6

We’ve got a few more pages here this Saturday to the second episode of Sunnyville Stories.  This second installment of the series, titled “Multiball Madness”, tells of Rusty facing a sudden challenge from local rich girl, Rose Von Straussen, in a pinball game.  Turning down her challenge or losing at the game will possibly wreck his reputation.  As I was explaining before, this is much like Star Wars Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back.  Everything goes downhill for Rusty in the early part of the comic.  Anyway, let’s take a peek at some more of the pages.

Episode 2 page 4Sam may be a motherly type character but she’s still young which makes her very energetic as you can see here.

That dust cloud Sam leaves behind and those speed lines were done with a brush.  I’m still clumsy with brush inking but it works well here.  I’m more of a pen man myself but will practice more with brush inking.  In fact, I just might have a post in the future on brushes so stay tuned! Continue reading

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How to Make Comics: Drawing Comics

I’ve reviewed how to come up with ideas for comics, told you the basics of writing for comics, and then some more detail on it.  Now we’re going to actually talk about DRAWING comics.  The process of actually drawing your comic is divided up into pencilling, lettering, and inking.  Those will each have their own entry.  This particular blog post will consist of focusing on the drawing aspect of comics.

Here’s a tough one:  do you need to be able to draw to make comics?  Think it over…time’s up!  The answer?  You DO NOT need to be able to draw to make comics! Hmm…what was that?  There’s a few of you out there in Internetland that don’t believe me?  I’ll explain.  There are some people out there who do NOT draw at all.  There are some out there who use photographs to make comics.  They might use photographs of people, action figures, stock images, etc.  One example of this is the Alien Loves Predator webcomic.  Some out there like David Rees use clipart to make their comics such as the rather left-wing cartoon collection Get Your War On.

There are those who draw minimally for their works.  A very good example of this would be Matt Feazell who is well known for drawing stick figures.  There are many more examples of stylized, exaggerated, and/or minimal drawing methods of drawing.  Many of these can be found on the newspaper comics pages of today and yesterday.  Look at Charles Schulz (Peanuts) as well as Bud Fisher (Mutt and Jeff) and Cathy Guisewite (Cathy).  So if you can’t draw or don’t feel that you’re good at it, don’t worry about it.  There are other people out there who don’t draw well or don’t do so at all.

Contrary to what a lot of people think, drawing is not necessarily some inborn talent that you have or you don’t – it’s actually a skill that you can learn!  So how do you go about learning how to draw?  Well, luckily there’s no shortage of books out there to use.  A number of these are quite affordable though if money is an issue, you can get used copies online or visit your local library.

I can recommend two very handy books.  The one is probably one of the best (if not the BEST) books out there and it is titled The New Drawing on the Right Side of the Brain by Dr. Betty Edwards (Tarcher/Penguin, 1979).  This book can teach ANYONE how to draw even if you have no drawing experience or skill.  I’ve used this book to great effect – my drawing skills vastly improved.  This is also available as a workbook and a video (both in DVD and VHS format).  I also advise the Art of Basic Drawing from the Walter Foster company.  The Walter Foster publishing company has a variety of books on drawing, painting, calligraphy, and other artistic subjects.  What’s more is that their books are quite affordable.  You can buy a number of them for around US$10!  Continue reading

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Sunnyville Stories Episode 2, pages 1-3

Today, I’m going to share with you a few teaser pages from the second episode of Sunnyville Stories.  This episode is titled “Multiball Madness” and it was finished in the summer of 2010.  I didn’t get it printed up though until December.  Here’s a brief rundown of the episode – Rusty Duncan crosses the path of the local rich girl Rose Von Straussen and her brother, Konrad Von Straussen.  (Check out the entry on the Von Straussen family for more details.)  She promptly challenges him to a pinball game…or she’ll tell everyone in town that Rusty’s a chicken.

The pilot episode for Sunnyville Stories was a much warmer one than the second episode.  Rusty was welcomed with open arms by Sam and quickly befriended the town’s children thanks to her.  This installment of our story is meant to be the pizzicato of a symphony, the second act of a play, or like Star Wars Episode V: The Empire Strikes Back – everything quickly goes to hell for Rusty Duncan.  He’s just made new friends but the teasing from Rose threatens his fledgling status.  But enough about that.  How about we take a look at some comics pages?

Episode 2 CoverThis is the cover I eventually settled on for the second episode.  This was originally done in colored ink and gouache but the background wash didn’t come out right – I had to touch up the background digitally with Photoshop.  Anyway, I think it’s a pretty effective cover – it grabs your attention, it establishes the main character and it’s definitely funny!

 

 

 

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How to Make Comics: More on Writing

Before I kick off this week’s blog post, I want to let everyone know some good news.  Optical Sloth gave a review of Sunnyville Stories episode 2 so go on over and check out the site.  While you’re there, check out some of the other comics reviewed.  A couple of them are quite impressive.

Last week, I started to explain the basics of writing comics.  I discussed the reversal of fortune and the recognition of that reversal.  I’ll talk some more about the writing process.  Some of you out there may wonder how exactly do I write a story.  Well, I’ll let you in on that very trade secret.  My process is that I first get an idea.  (Check my entry on generating ideas.)  When I search for my ideas, I look in various places.  Sometimes I draw upon my own personal experiences.  For example, the fourth episode of Sunnyville currently in production, entitled “Don’t Answer Me”, was partly drawn on my own personal experiences of how I had to admit when I was wrong.  Sometimes, I’ve drawn on the anime series that inspired Sunnyville, Maple Town.  Elements of episode 1 were based on the very first episode of Maple Town in which Patty Rabbit and her family move to Maple Town, coming in on the train.  Elements of episode 2 likewise were influenced by the second episode of Maple Town (titled in the USA “the Stolen Necklace”) where Patty Rabbit has a run-in with the local rich girl Fanny Fox.  From there, I do a handwritten story treatment.

Story Treatment

Again, this is not meant to be fancy.  It’s just a basic rundown of the story, keeping in mind the basic elements of the reversal of fortune and recognition of that reversal.  I don’t try to insert clever jokes or puns into this story treatment – the basic idea is just to get the premise of the story down.  The treatment usually isn’t more than a few pages.  Once I have the treatment written, I’ll use that, the intended theme of the story, and my notes on the characters to actually type up a script.  There are a couple of different ways to work up a script for a comic.  You might need nothing more than a page for a single page gag or four panel comic strip.  A typical 30-40 page story like I do will need something more substantial. Continue reading

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Sunnyville Stories Episode Zero

Hello, my dedicated fans.  Welcome back to the official Sunnyville Stories blog!  Last Saturday, we had the last pages to the first episode of Sunnyville Stories up.  Now the whole first episode of my slice-of-life comics series is fully available on this blog for absolutely free!  So go ahead and read it if you haven’t already.  I’d like to share with you some more comics this weekend.  Just before I began work on Sunnyville episode 1, I came up with a short minicomic that I drew in a day and made copies to hand out.  I was handing them out while attending Further Confusion 2010.  This minicomic was intended as teaser to my planned series, Sunnyville Stories.  It was a short prologue called “Sunnvyille Stories Episode #0: Moving Day”.  I should emphasize that this work is NOT part of the Sunnyville canon.  I made this simply as a preview.  I will do a similar prologue though for the planned Sunnyville trade paperback I plan for 2012.  That said, let’s read the comic together.

Sunnyville Stories Episode 0 Cover

This comic was done entirely by hand.  I drew it with Pigma Micron markers, Sharpies, and Pilot V-Razor Point pens.  The cover here is very simple, but it does work.  We have a very uneasy Rusty Duncan here waiting to enter his new home of Sunnyville.  In fact, that’s the theme of this comic – having to deal with the changes of life.  In fact, when I was doing this comic, I did draw upon my own personal experiences of having to move.

Episode 0 credits

Those “special thanks” names BTW are important.  Tom Motley was an important mentor.  It was at his night class at the School of Visual Arts that I started to really “come alive”.  The other person mentioned in the special thanks is Jason Little, who once stood in for Tom as a guest instructor and taught me some really good things about inking tools.  While it would ultimately be Matt Madden who had me switch over to traditional tools (dipping pens and brushes) from markers, Jason did set the groundwork for my transition. Continue reading

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